All Comments on 'Dominance Corporation, Inc. Ch. 12'

this story has ended, i do hope it continues in another way. What a lovely ending...and so sad to read the ending however good that it is...but also that it just ended. Thank you for allowing us to read you and hope you do keep writing...and soon please Sir*smile* respectfully fan in Texas naynay

This was an excellently written piece of work. Thank you for sharing.

This rating is for the stories together as one. I really enjoyed reading them, like a book you couldn't put down but with that extra fun. Thank you.

A very nice blend of mystery andsex appeal. Well developed characters and a nice twist at the end. I enjoyed your story thoroughly! I hope to read more if you are still writing.

I really enjoyed your story. It conjured up many feelings of submission and I could really relate to the characters. Well written!

I cried so much! Amazing. I couldn't stop reading it. So powerful and full of crazy emotions. Thank you for sharing this story.