All Comments on 'Dominated By Football Rival Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Good story... terrible ending

All that good work to build up to pretty much nothing for an ending. What a shame.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Your stories are good, though a bit formulaic. Every one seems to contain the same details. There's always a socially inferior guy with an enormous penis who manages to make the protagonist feel inferior in almost every way, mostly because he has a little peepee. You're a good writer. How about maybe mixing it up a little, or trying a new formula?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I enjoy your work. Really hope the next chapter includes him being dared to wear Jessica's panties and getting made fun of for how well they fit. Maybe Jessica even decides he should keep wearing them since he can't last, stay hard, or keep his starting job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I hate the demeaning treatment of your main character just based on his dick size. The stats say that 5 inches is average so Nick is not a micro-dick. And Jennifer acts like complete cockslut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

hot story. I like it when a big jock stud gets taken down. Also like the panty comment from above. be hot if he was made to wear panties and be a slutty pussy bitch for the younger college stud.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Seriously?! How are the first two stories under the Gay category.

It's all pussy, tits and straight sex. Blech!

TallWhiteStudTallWhiteStud9 months ago

but now a freshman was showing him up in squats, military press, and bench press.

The worst moment ever is being out dudes athletically

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