All Comments on 'Dominated by Her Stepdaughter Ch. 03'

Just as you started getting somewhere here you stopped. Why? maybe write more than a page before uploading. this wasn't even a cliff hanger. The writing itself is great, the story is great ,the character build and descriptions are great. you just need to give us some prose to go with it. only 4 stars this time.

I feel that the 3 chapters could have been 1. GREAT STORY SO FAE

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