by Bigboy37
She's on her knees giving U a bj and your reaching down to play with her tits? Are U an orangutan?
No way would he pull out just shot his cum deep up inside her unprotected pussy
You should do 2 more chapters of this, one where he dominates Lindsay, and the final chapter involving either a new conquest/s or an anal 3-way with both Lindsay and Beth. That would be some hot shit. But regardless of my hopes and dreams on this stories continuation, you are an excellent writer, hope to see more from you.
This was a great read, especially for a first submission. I look forward to more of your stories.
Now he is going to fuck everything in sight hope their all ready for his 9" cock, yeah right!!!!
Enjoyed your first story and I encourage you to keep writing. Maybe Beth can talk Lindsey into enjoying submission and exploring her sexuality more. Love stories about two slutty girls sharing themselves with each other and a very lucky boy. He needs to take charge of them both and teach Lindsey about being a slut.
it was good but nor great. you need to flesh things out more and go into more details.