All Comments on 'Domination Ch. 05'

5* was doing great till the name changes then it kinda lost it for me. was a great read either way

Why do that? Doesn't really make any sense, once you did that the story became confusing as I couldn't remember who was who and then I gave up. I was a good story until then.

The read was great but i think you should just leave it with an epilogue si that this doesn't get too boring.

Love it. The name changes messed me up for alittle bit. Hope to be reading chapter 50 some time in the future

I love the story so far. Just really confused by the name changes. Actually had to write down who as who. Wish you would not have gone in that direction. Looking forward to more chapters!

Amazing series, not crazy about the way dad was treated by his CEO. I have to agree about the name changes but I do like the names he chose. Can't wait for what happens next.

Excellent story

When can we have the newest installment?

Keep up the good work and enjoy writing these stories.

This story might be one of my favorite on all of literotica. You do a really good job. But with this new development with the dad has got me worried for this story. Now of course I can’t judge on here or at all. But personally I wouldn’t bring the dad into the fold, but rather turn him away

Hey man when is your next story coming looking forward to it

Hey man how Long does it normally take for the admin‘s to approve a story it’s been a couple days now ?

Fuck NO, don’t bring the Dad into the group but let him pay for everything

He was not a great dad, but neither he was a bad, abusive dad. His reward? See how his wife has with other man all the sex she denies him.

Sorry but your MC is an asshole.

Cuckold Dad, is no good.

The story has taken a sad turn at this point His father does not deserve this. He should free his mom and let her husband take her as his slave. The son needs to move out and take his other two slaves with him. He needs to get out of his parents marriage. The way he is treating his father is disgusting, not arousing.

If I had tried this shit with my father he would’ve killed me literally.

Fix the Dad problem, he does not deserve his fate he did nothing wrong to the son or the wife to be a cuckold in his own home by his son and wife

If nothing else can work to get the tale on track do one of the following

He divorces Mom

He enslaves Mom with sons help, the rest leave home

Dad dies somehow.

That then frees up mom to be a slut to the son.

I feel on the fence of the cuck dad. Yeah, he stole from his company and then whored himself out which meant cheating on his wife, and then put her in a position too she felt he had to steal from her company to avoid him going to jail. However, I think he learned his lesson.

Also please fix this chapter where he tells his dad he gave them all slave names. you removed that part from the story but not here to it makes no sense and throws people off if they didn't read your prefaces.

great story, loving it. AAAA++++

Going well. So far Dad has not been handled in a bad way but it needs resolving going forward perhaps when all move to Baton Rouge leaving Dad at home but he needs someone to be his mistress!!!