All Comments on 'Domme-in-Law'

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glorialamuseglorialamuseover 13 years ago
Very Nice

OMG I can't believe this is you first submission, I loved it, great story line well written and nice character development, I hope there is a next chapter.

well done

BillPorterBillPorterover 13 years ago
Training !!!

I enjoyed your story, I hope there is more to come, about Jim's training, as a sissy boy, too both the mother, and his wife.

TammiBadgerTammiBadgerover 13 years ago
Nice Start

I hope his training continues. Get girls into high heeled boots. Jimmi or whatever name he gets with be in heels soon enough. Will there be more drugs in his future? Will SHE met Mr. Jones? I see much fun ahead.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice beginning

Awesome story for your first. Love to read more and the drug insert was great do more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Mothers in law are best served

With a old red wine a shovel and 6 feet of dirt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
In-Laws!

I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens when the father-in-law gets home!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Well done.

This is the type of training many men need. It often takes an experienced mature woman to provide it. Many woman can learn from this story

cc69sissycc69sissyover 12 years ago
boypet

what a lucky boypet

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

I would love to have a Mrs. Jones in my life. I would gladly be her boypet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
F'ed up Marriage, same with the story

Thank God this is a work of fiction. If it was real, the marriage is doomed. Drugged coffee. Caught masturbating? Hahahaha. He should have dressed and left. Wife set this up? Even more reasons to leave and burn the family/bitch.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Really dumb

How is his relationship with the bitch mother in law incest? And why would he not smack her in the mouth the minute he found out she had drugged him. Total crap.

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