All Comments on 'Donald Comes to Town Ch. 04'

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DevonCowboyDevonCowboyover 1 year ago

Such a fucking hot story. My balls are reloading and need the next chapter ASAP

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Definitely five stars plus and yes please write a chapter #5. The slut in me would like to see Marc join in on the action and maybe even Sebastian's father. The bromance lover in me though, likes the threesome, it makes it a little more special. I'm sure whatever you decide will be HOT and I'm glad that wrote that Marc knows what's going on and is OK with it. MLF

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Yes please continue with another chapter! This was super hot and loved how Seb so enjoyed his first bottom experiences with both men. Now I’d like to see Jeremy bottom. He seems like such a stud, but “he’s a man and can take it like a man”! Also soon it seems like Marc will return. He says he’s not mad but frankly I can’t imagine how he would not be bummed to see and know that Logan is having the best fucks of his life with these other men.

LoganPrejean337LoganPrejean337over 1 year agoAuthor

@DevonCowboy - fuck! that is hot and I am on it! More very soon! And you will all certainly get a lot more from these characters and get to meet a few more guys in the neighborhood so please Like, Favorite and follow me! ALSO thanks so much for the comments, its the first thing I do when I check in is read the comments so please don't hold back, both @trappedinthecl0set love to hear from you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I shot a load before I even went to page two. Your descriptions of everything is so perfect i can get a true visual of what's taking place. I've shared this with a couple of people who know about me because I'm not out yet, and am a divorced dad. They too think these chapters are some of the best written ever. Keep them going.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Commenting before I finished but this is how I know this is shit, as I read the texts from Marc my stomach dropped and I was saying oh fuck oh fuck (till I saw that he liked it ofc) but damn imagine having such an impact on your readers they feel the emotions are yr characters

NaplesjoeNaplesjoe8 months ago

You do realize that this is the hottest collection on here! This is so perfect. I usually don’t read long stories, but can’t stop reading. Feel as if I know these people. Great writing, and editing!!

PrinceraPrincera5 months ago

🔥 just 🔥

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Gay, 32 year old Cajun import writer of erotica. Let me know what gets you off and let's write a story about it! Follow me for updates and additional info on Twitter: @LoganPrejean

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