All Comments on 'Donna and Billy'

Good story, but a bit too f revenge on the ex would of have been pretty satisfying.

To many plots and none were enjoyable to me. Sorry

Loved it

I liked it except for the fact that the husband got away with his crime. The ex losing his license or something would be satisfying. Also more than a little unrealistic that Donna, who was an accountant and/or worked at a bank would know nothing of their finances. Other than that enjoyable.

Wish idiots who couldn't tell the difference between facts and fiction would just get banned from commenting in Literotica,..... I can't believe there are actually people that stupid on this planet... If you are offended by this story, just stick with hollywood or buy some New York Time best sellers..............

I could have been a god story but non consensual intoxicated sex is wrong, if Billy was half the man he would let his buddys rape her unconsious.

Needs a rape /nonconsent warning

Now this way as a great story,,,And I think another chapter would have been nice with grandparents more into it,,,

But all in all it was great,,,

I LOVE how romantic you did that, without taking down the filthy and the domineering parts!

Yay for the happy endings!

Quit at watched porno films and got rougher.

Most women I know are not porno actresses and in real life most of the women I and friends know would use a rusty knife for getting rough. Real life Not porno films

Label as fantasy if going for films etc

And as another said

It was rape

If drunk can't give consent and therefore RAPE