All Comments on 'Donna and the Swedish Au Pair'

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Donna is so head over heels its funny. Great character. But what happened to her? Gave it a 4 because of the great writing. Captured Donna's dilemma and Mia's natural reactions. Felt Mia is less interesting, so why write an epilogue about her?