by MTL17
A very good start to what promises to be a great series. I definitely look forward to reading more. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
I've come back and read this several different times, from beginning to end. This is so well written, and so damn hot, that I find myself drawn back again and again. Thanks for writing this great series!
Fuckin hot. I have dreamed of Jackie and Donna together. Write more but with Jackie as a master of seduction.
Just found this story and am finding it very interesting. Enjoyed part 2 even more, need to finish reading the rest, but so far very good story.