All Comments on 'Donor Uncle in Apartment Pt. 01'

Stick to one woman, Savita or Rupa or Mansi. Too many female characters instead of male characters. The lead should be one woman with multiple partners. This story is all over the place. 2 stars at best.

Good story, just get it edited by someone. Send an email to other writers. Ask them

Yaar I don't know what Jats or North Indians fantasize about Bengali women or for Bengali males being too weak. I have seen Bengalis up in the north and neither are their women easy to bed or their men fools. Until and unless you take rowdyism of the north Indians into account I don't think these north Indian guys are ahead in any count

Excellent!! Lovely story, please continue!!

Great story and your natural Indian phrasing makes me feel like I’m there ... in a most positive way.

Excellent visualizations created of the recipient face/mouth outcomes from the “ejaculating erected cock” ... the description of the gaging cum back through the nose was priceless and had me rolling on the floor. Seriously, some of the best written stuff I’ve seen that made me literally see/feel/smell/taste the stuff.

I must respectfully disagree with my cousin (the other “anonymous”) regarding the number of Women; variety is the spice of life and the wide range of women types he is loving is great. Heck, I even got the hots for the sweeper lady!

Keep it coming, I look forward to the continuation. Whatever you do don’t over-edit out your visualizations and Indian phraseology ... this combination is most powerful!

Thanks!

Amazing story, excellent read right from shy homely housewives to dirty sweeper woman! Keep going on add some lesbian action and widow action too

The writer will never miss a cliche nor a totally contrived situation and cardboard characters

i read description, ....then start the story and its gupta this kumar that like i give a crap about the subtleties of that bigoted caste system, lemme tell u dotheads...NOBODY in the US gives a crap about whos in what caste...here...you're Just another foreigner

great story