All Comments on 'Donor Uncle in Apartment Pt. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice!

Would there be a sequel or prequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Add harem tag to this story

Please add a harem tag to your story chapters. It's fantastic!

aamirhydkhanaamirhydkhanover 3 years ago
Waiting for a sequel or prequel?

We eagerly await a sequel or prequel? to the story.. You are a Fantastic writer..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
.Thanks to this fantastic author

Wonderfully long story, not a single line boring, literary of the highest quality, here you can find everything, deep feelings, romance, sexuality in all its facets, dirty talk, words of love that touch the soul, fetishes are served, Indian wedding rituals and the anatomy of sexual intercourse as it is so rare or never read before.

Thank you KANYAKUMARI

really amazing and a lot of work to write such long stories, whenever you think this is now the grand finale, the reader is mistaken, it goes from highlight to highlight. An extraordinary author.

kanyakumari007kanyakumari007over 3 years agoAuthor
Thanx

Thank you all for yours valuable comments. I could have dragged the story further, but I am exhausted, you all can imagine how much strenuous efforts one could put for plots,sub-plots,giving maximum times for the story, but I am going to start a new long story, with interesting plots for which I need sometimes.

Once again, Thanking you all.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome

U are a great writer

Please add prequel to the story

Pawan sex life in his early age

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Downhll frol part 5-6

Your erotica was outstanding...reason i am saying was is because from epsidoe 5-6 you stopped describing your ladies assets, what they are wearing...every girl turns up...no description of them or bare minimum,no description of their attire, merely 1 or 2 low saree...a few handful of ornament descriptions...what happened ? you used to describe your girls dresses in deatils,make them wear the lowest possible saree...last few parts no saree at all...no below navel description...erotica and sex too was uninspiring and repetitive. Hope to see you come up with another similar masterpiece like this one where you describe your Indian ladies in their indian attire and jewellery in great details...make them wear lowest possible saree with smallest blouse available like you used to do previous;y...still rating you 5 stars like I did your story up to part 5. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Request for foursome with payal aprajitha and her daughter

Threesome with parthi and daughter and four some with kakoli her sil and mil

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