All Comments on 'Donovan Chronicles: Awakening Ch. 02'

I like how you wrote the second chapter with James telling Donvan the truth about why he came to live with the family. I like how Vicki was helping him get an understanding of sex and how to please a woman. I like how Donvan was able to have fun with Vicki and start to understanding why he came to live with the family. Can hardly wait for the next chapter to see how you develop the characters of James, Vicky and Gale.

An erotic story about V could be good. A story with Mike, Juliet Parrish and Ham Tyler or one with Elizabeth, her mother Robin Maxwell and Kyle Bates maybe? Anywhy this story was ok.

I love this story...want more!!! Sum might think its to long but I think its great. I've read it like 4 times!!! 5 from me!

I love your descriptions and your characters, and I can't wait for Chapter 3!

I loved this story, it has many layers. When will there be a new chapter??