All Comments on 'Don't'

Marvellous story; well written, very erotic and sensitive.

Please, correct this one mistake: "as my clothes flew off the clothes"

Go on writing!

All the best from Holland,

Ab

One is a rapper who doesn't belong in this story. He bounced me right out once he appeared, so I won't rate you as I didn't finish your story.

It wasn't the typical threesome, it was just friends trying to make their friend feel good about herself and sharing a sexual experience. Nothing more. And she didn't suddenly become a third member of their marriage, it happened, they're all moving on, period. Loved the ending too where she acknowledges what it was and how much she enjoyed it. Just perfect.