by jeanne_d_artois
Fun story and nice romance, too...even if the Lucy-as-Mike-while-Mike-is-Michelle watch switches at the end got a little confusing (after Mike tossed the groper).
Nice concept, but the use of proper names was *way* over the top. There were a lot of places where a simple "he" or "she" would have still made perfect sense, and might have kept the repetitiveness from becoming distracting.