All Comments on 'Don't Annoy a Fairy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fun story and nice romance, too...even if the Lucy-as-Mike-while-Mike-is-Michelle watch switches at the end got a little confusing (after Mike tossed the groper).

abiostudent3abiostudent3almost 3 years ago

Nice concept, but the use of proper names was *way* over the top. There were a lot of places where a simple "he" or "she" would have still made perfect sense, and might have kept the repetitiveness from becoming distracting.

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