All Comments on 'Don't Call Me Grandpa'

Felt pretty rape-y to me.

Her boy friend died in the vietnam war.

While his brother went to the middle east war.

Vietnam war ended April of 1975

The wars in the middle east did not start until 1991. 16 years later. Are the characters in your story time travelers? The time lime makes no sense at all

Oops . . . glad you caught that, please forgive my sloppiness.

Mistake/s aside, what did you think of the story?

Good story. Made me hot.