All Comments on 'Don't Deport My Girlfriend!'

by dasti08

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This was extremely hot!

The rating for this story doesn't reflect how good it since people are upset with the heartbreak of it. For this genre, it's easily one of the best stories I've ever read. Don't stop writing dude! Really hope we see more of Cammy Cans :)

dasti08dasti08over 4 years agoAuthor
Thanks, anon.

This is my first story ever. I'm open to criticism (I'm a extreme submissive, so I'm more than open to it). But I basically wrote a story I wanted to read. Happy if it gives anyone some enjoyment.

No guarantees if I'll do anything more, or even involving Cammy. I'm open to the idea, though not sure where I'd go from here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Her point of view

Not bad, but I sure would enjoy a story like this being told by Camila. What she had to go through, what her first time stripping felt like, etc.

andibob69andibob69almost 2 years ago

You really are a cuck aren’t you? Fucking freak ;) Really enjoyed this story! You should write more. You got a sick mind and I like it.

dasti08dasti08almost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you, andibob69. You'r'e the best.

PiusPaulPiusPaul10 months ago

Wonderful story! Love the change in both their relationship and in Camilla.

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I'm getting a start at this. I'm a submissive man, so I'll have a tendency towards tropes along those lines. I'm open to criticism, be as harsh as you like.