All Comments on 'Dont Judge a Book by its Cover'

The scene with her falling off the ladder and unconscious which turned into sex was not very credible and felt a bit forced, but other than that, I really enjoyed this piece and hope that we get to hear more about these two characters. Keep up the good work!

and really a fun read - keep writing

Continue. Excellent first chapter. Will be a pity if no sequel follows. 5 star for the build up.

Another GREAT, well written story. Keep them coming.

Thanks so much for your comments! I appreciate the input.

really GOOD, well written story. Thank you!

Beautiful so far! I like the build up and development in the story, and I am looking forward to the rest!

Sure would have liked to read several more chapters.

I guess I'm not shy like her, but your writing almost made me imagine I was. It was nice. Thanks for writing this.

Nice premise.

Needed more breast playing/sucking, and perhaps titty fucking.

Needed her to do more than just jerk him off. Dialog during it. Am I doing it right? Do you like it? Do you think it would feel good if I played with your balls? How should I do it?

And what about her ass?

Four stars.

Thank you all for the comments. This was one of my earlier efforts. Hopefully they are getting better!

Thanks again!