All Comments on 'Don't Kiss Me'

I found it pretty humorous and ironic. I particularly liked the use of the identical opening and closing sentences.

this story should be puvlished in www.fictionmania.tv and here

loved your story! but it need more chapters. i would love to see how he reacts when you tell him hoe he came to,be your cum loving sissy bitch!!

The existing story could do with some editing to tighten up the story and reduce it a little in length. Quality more than quantity. I found that by half way through I was speed reading. I also have to agree with Kraffty that it could with the addition of how and why it all started and some direct insight into what happened in the doctors office? How did she know the doctor? How does he react when she explains to him what exactly has happened? But having said that it was an enjoyable read.

are one amusingly fucked up guy. Well I guess at least your stories reflect what you've written in your bio. Hopefully by now you've found an equally fucked up women who's made you her well used cunt.

What an awesome story! I absolutely loved it.