All Comments on 'Don't Look Like a Seal Pt. 03'
by AuroraIncident
- 11 Comments
brownmobalmost 5 years agokeep feeding us sods that love this series, i know it takes time to write but we are hanging here waiting on the next installment
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoA very enjoyable read. Thank you for all your work. It is appreciated. 5 stars.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoNice cliffhanger at the end; please don't keep us dangling too long.
ender2k2kalmost 5 years agoBut it is frustrating when they do something stupid. I get why they left the house. But there is no way he would not be on the phone to Alex in the car to let him know what was going on. Thanks
dgfergieover 2 years agosneaking around waiting for the action, can't remember the motive behind all this, good writing and thanks to the editors they didn't miss much.
Anonymousover 1 year agoIt's getting stupid... These have to be the worst security/bodyguards in the history of the profession... And again... The banter is excruciating...
-jaye-
KRD19254about 2 months agoNope, this is getting way to STUPID!
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Ken/SEAL has communications/cellphone and is not using it to pull-in back-up cover at the house when looking out the window? Not calling the PD Dick's for an ALERT/backup? Not calling Alex/TJ/Ramon to blast an ALERT (this could become a coordinated attack)...
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Nope to stupid, POORLY written for dramatics making Ken/SEAL really dumb. Driving to an Aquarium and NOT a local PD/cop-shop or even Fire-house - dumb, dumb, dumb. Just poor story dramatics with no common sense.
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Ken has his pistols and not his PI Shield/creds/carry-license on him? Really?
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Keep his guns - let the metal detectors go off - pull-in the rent-a-cops who will call PD. You want more good guns the PD Dick's will eventually clear him. Michelle will get MNGMT attention/help.
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This just dropped a whole rating point:
3*** hooyah
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