All Comments on '"Don't Miss," He Said Ch. 02'

Did any of this make any sense to anyone other than the author? I was assuming that it does make sense to the author, but now I'm having doubts about it.

-- srgeek --

I love it, but it reads more like a manga might...I'm thinking if you either drew illustrations or found someone willing to do it for you, it would be wonderful! (PS, loved the groundhog thing!) =D

...left yourself a lot of questions to answer. I hope to see the answers in the coming chapters that will be necessary to fill in all of the blanks. -M

I've read both installments of this, and although I like it and the characters, I find it confusing. Where is this school? Is it a high school or university? Did Judas kill Elena's parents? Was Alphonse there when she discovered it? Sorry if I'm missing the obvious, but I'm just foundering here. Maybe I need more sleep...