All Comments on 'Don't Move! Ch. 02'

I only just found your previous chapter and commented on that too. I meant to say before, but forgot, that I can't really believe that English isn't your first language. Although, having said that, I have sometimes found that people that are not english language born are often better at english grammar!

The tenderness that this story conveys is sublime, in my opinion. I can't wait to read more, it you will write it.

The erotic follow-up to ch 1 doesn't disappoint.

I really appreciate it. I guess, if people like to read it, I could write more.

i. loved. this.

please, continue to write. you have a real gift with words.

So hot! I just wonder why this is in romance category and not in erotic couplings, as there is no romance aspect in this.

There is one little thing that reveals your 1st language is something else than English. In English „ is not used, it is ” both before and after.