All Comments on 'Don't Underestimate Me! Ch. 08'

by NylonDreams

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Decal_lastDecal_lastabout 3 years ago

One o the best stories I have ever read.

NewyorkyankeeNewyorkyankeealmost 3 years ago

Probably my most favorite story of the hundreds I read. The vengeance was excellent and the good sex was powerful. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Huh?

Firsttimer0570Firsttimer0570over 2 years ago

Another fine line of stories, but somehow I have a feeling this is not the end of it

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Happily ever after...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WOW! Takes BTB (burn the bastards) to a whole new level. A great ending; think Lorraine has a lifetime supply of clients after all this. Expected either Joanna or John to experience loss of their anal virginity. Seems like ending with Alice came from left field. Would have expected closing with John and Joanna since they were the main characters.

Great story. VERY different from the original story https://www.literotica.com/s/carpe-diem-ch-01-1 by Deuce226. Love different interpretations of story line.

I'm anonymous only because I don't have an account. This is clearly one of my favorite authors.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

wow so well done couple of confusing bit i had to reread i think were my own fault trying to rush to see what would happen next thax

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wow a husband who has an invisibility cloak, RPGs in his garage, Apache attack helicopters, and regiments of special forces troops at his disposal. Why not just reveal that he is really Clark Kent. Then he can put on his tights in the nearest phone booth and fly backwards around the earth until he turns back time. It would be more believable then this shifty revenge porn you posted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is way over the top even for the most unrealistic story catagory. At least its a big change from the many cuck and wimp stories that seem to fill these spaces. Thanks for that. Believe me,you could have had a real winner here if you had tried for realistic fiction....JZK

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It should have been in Erotic Horror. It is sick. Sorry I read it. Rule of Law was ignored. The players were as guilty of crime as the perps. While I support freedom of speech, this one should be removed, or reclassified.

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