All Comments on 'Door Unlocked Ch. 02'

I think she got her dicks worth i hope she chokes on it the slut.

You write like a retard. People don't take the way you've narrated it. That's how robots talk - as imagined by 10 yr olds. As far as the sex - that's exactly how a virgin 10 yr old would describe one of his own fantasies.

Come back when you've grown up and have had some real life and live experiences. Like, say, in about 50 years....

Last commentor just killed this wanna-be rape stories author! OUCH! Now you know thats gotta hurt! Author! Give it up. You have been verbally beheaded and buried in a shallow unmarked grave. Better stop writing lousy rape stories and try something new and different. Pathetic fuckin loser