All Comments on 'Dorks'

Not sure if you did it on purpose to illustrate Jerry's mental whirlwind, but all those unattributed lines just confused me. Just figured every female voice was Molly unless stated otherwise.

Enjoyed it, thanks

Hope his dick doesn't fall off.

A bit of fun. Shame he hadn't learnt to speak, or was he mute?

A very fun read, I wish there had been a discussion of his first time with Karen.

Where does the succubus tag come from?

Jerry is a lucky man! But, what happens if they start popping out kids?

Love it. A great story. AAAAAA++++++

Too bad their birth control wouldn't fail, or the rubbers didn't break. Then he'd be a daddy at least 4 times!

He definitely has the stamina of Hercules!!!