All Comments on 'Dorm Daze Ch. 01'

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mammoetmammoetover 8 years ago
great start

more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Love it

Keep it going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Great start

But I'm really wanting another chapter of Bookworm, lol.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosover 8 years ago
Very nice!

I look forward to reading more of the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Tan

Asian girls are not tan... All the girls you write about are always "tan" but they're actually white or apparently Asian. I'm assuming Asian was the best fit in this case because they're "smart"... Fuck that stereotype. Can you please have a bit more diversity here? Maybe a Mexican warrior princess or a Persian queen. Oh, and you use curly blonde hair a lot as a feature... gross!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Hitomi.? That reminds me of hitomi tanaki a porn star with really big boobs is this character based off of her

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