All Comments on 'Dorm Mates'

by GreenEyedLocoman

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More please!

Would love the story to continue! thanks for a nice story.

GreenEyedLocomanGreenEyedLocomanover 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback

Glad you liked the story. Not sure if it's going to continue (was thought of as a one-off), but I do have a couple more lil' ditties in my head I might jot down.

Jemgirl01Jemgirl01almost 14 years ago
hum

I like it, but the end was interesting. Like there is more to be said.

I'm not sure what you can add to this and have it feel like a true continuation and not just something to make people think that you just came up with an ending that made the guy like the other guy and fuss up to being bi.

I liked your story. It felt good and I could see everything happening and believe it.

Let me see what else you wrote. :)

Good job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
like it

i like the story i can relate myself to Sean, how I start to fall in love to someone i know won't ever make a drop a look at me, but he did and now reading this story makes me reminisce the past i fought for my one love George.. to the author of this wonderful piece i hope you make this a series i will keep on reading it.....duchess

Voyeur326Voyeur326over 6 years ago
Nicely fleshed out (ha!) story.

Good detail - I can picture the scenes. Very interested in what Dean's issue is.

-ck

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