by PowerGirl96
Great story! The juxtoposition is touching and amusing. I especially liked the inhaler. Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it includes a glimpse of how these two met and got together in the first place.
The only grammatical flaw I saw was check out the difference in meanings and usages of excepted and accepted. It will be interesting to see the next chapter, or chapters...
Great story.....looking forward to a sequel. My favorite story ideas have always been the ones where people are complete opposites, especially the jock/nerd category.
Keep up the good work. :-)
thanks for sharing this story. I'm looking forward to the next part.
That was a pretty good story. I wouldn't mind reading another chapter of it myself.
Listen to 3113 down there at the bottom, eh? That girl has good taste in GM stories, and won't tell you it's good if it ain't. *grin*
This is my first time leaving a comment but this story was hot and simple! Can'r wait for the next chapter!
Please continue with the sequel to this story! Writing "to be continued" and then not finishing it up just seems cruel, haha. Love the story so far and would love to read more!!
It is nice that the occasion between the two worked out so well. There could have been a lot of misunderstanding.