All Comments on 'Double Booked & Double Parked'

Love this! It’s soooo good, please keep it going

Awesome story! Definitely five stars! I’d give it ten if I could.

Another surefire hit, SSL! It's this type of story that makes me wonder how the heck you can ever complete a story...I'd be so hot that I'd have to "take care" of myself while writing!

Please yes i want Joy to get it good from both cocks. More please you are the best two cums reading it.

Very enjoyable story, hope these two friends go further with Joy and then come out to their wives after the weekend, with some suitably kinky foursome action.

Great story!! Please let Joy double-stuffed, Thank You!!!

We definitely need a part 2 .

Wow.... in general, I absolutely love your stories, but this one is the best yet!!! Please keep going. I want to hear how Joy gets double stuffed! Just a suggestion: maybe Miranda and Sarah find out about the whole thing and then punish Carl, Alex, and Joy until all 5 are completely satisfied.

I love all your stories. This one tops the list.

Another great story. Wish I was in Alex's place. Really looking forward to your essay on How to Accept you Like Cock.

Wow.. that was so hot. mmmmm please write more

Continue please. I want the wives and Joy’s daughter involved!

I love your writing. Please add more to this story. I want Joy to meet their wives!

You really got story no.666 really hot, like it deverved it.

Nicely done sir.

Yessss. You could even bring the wives in with strapons. Discover their husband's enjoyment of each other and let them discover Alex's love of cock.

Carl is an insufferable narcissist and he needs to be humiliated by the others.

So many avenues to pursue. Yes, please continue with your wonderful characters.

On page 1 the name Miranda changed to Melinda.

Part two ASAP

loved the story and look forward to reading about Joy's DP

I loved this story. It would be great to have a sequel where the wives join in.

Yes, pls <3

Absolutely the best! You write so well and you have such a beautiful mind. Always easy to imagine myself in the frame of your stories. Your dialog completes the picture so beautifully (whereas I can't write dialog worth anything).

Thank you, a thousand times over.

Fantastic story.

I totally want Joy to get double stuffed. It would be fun if their wives decided to surprise them and it turned into an orgy.

More please

Oh wow almost every fantasy I have

Another awesome story from a great writer. If there's a part II, I think the wives have to get in on the act. Would be super hot if Carl and girls all took advantage of, and humiliated Alex. No cock cages though!

You really know how to write about male feelings how a male feels about sucking a cock for the first time and the guilt he sometimes feels for enjoying another male

Such a hot sexy story. I need that part 2 as fast as you can write it. I was waiting for Joy to get her long overdue dicking and was disappointed it didn't happen in this story, but now I can look forward to that in part 2.

Something to consider for future parts of this story or even its own story, two words "Lucky Pierre".

I'd actually have preferred it if it had stayed as just the two guys, but as it is I'd love to see where it goes next.

Yes this was really good. A part 2 focusing on Joy would be awesome. Maybe a part 3 with the wives coming up and joining them. Alex needs to share his Bi side with his wife. Thank you for a great and sexy story.

'"Yes, I do know. Go ahead and say it, faggot," Carl replied.'

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'Oddly, he was always the one who used that word, either calling himself one out loud or in his thoughts. He'd never heard Carl use it even once.'

think this was missed in the edit

Another of your wonderful, hot stories. I enjoyed your character, Joy, and her introduction into male on male sex . Can't wait for your next story. Keep up your very good story writing. It sure keeps me up and hard reading them.

Maybe Joy missing date is accidently with the wives next door after she gave him the wrong room number?

Oh fuck yes, don’t stop now! Let em fill all three of her hot holes and stuff her with cum… then maybe on Black Friday she can go buy herself a strap on to use on Alex while Carl fucks his face, and the bottom boy learns to love ass to mouth with both dildo and cock!

Another great story! Definitely Joy needs to get fucked by Alex and Carl! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Yes Joy needs it all!

Would love the sequel but not holding my breath. Too many promises of sequels that never materialize. Still waiting on follow on to ‘Freeuse Faggot’ which had 40 people begging for more. Love your talented, delicious writing, but I have to stop checking your page daily for sequels that never appear.

Hope you keep it going

Love it. One of your best and that's saying something.

This story is not done yet. The weekend is young. There has to be more. fThis is not the genre that I read Literotica for, but I like this author so I read it. It is great fun being hilareous in parts and pornographic in others. I never though I would enjoy a gay story bu this is great.

Very good love it very much. One of your best stories. I kind of wish I was Alex and I would love to see Joy get stuffed good.

I would absolutely love to read the rest of this story!

Please continue with Joy getting double fucked and spit roasted! This was a great story. Wish I was Alex!

That is a sensational story - it just cannot end there! So descriptive and so so hot that I can't wait for the story to continue or for the characters to have future tales. The only thing hotter would be if it was illustrated.

Maybe Alex's nylon fetish should see him in stockings too?

Joy sounds like my kind of lady and this sounds like my dream weekend!

Great stuff. Alex should start dressing if not become a shemale