by TooTallToFall
Nice premise.
Sex scenes happened too automatically. Lack details. Move along too quickly. End too quickly.
Four stars.
Awesome writing. 5*. Just loved the pace and build up. Looking forward to more such great works from you.
Very enjoyable story! Good writing style and buildup. Looking forward to reading the rest of your stories!
Loved the story! Sexy as hell! Keep writing I can't wait for something more!