by rebel_code
The build-up was long but we'll worth it. Like foreplay, it just made it hotter for the main course. I thought the idea of dancing was fantastic as it leads to sex often for my wife and I. Nice story for just your second writing.
Excellent buildup, both couples were likable characters, realistic when Julie was feeling a little jealous. Julie & Bill were completely seduced by this couple, bit by bit. I wouldn't cop-out & write a been there done that, one on one affair between two of them. Seems like every swinging story goes that way.
One of the best written stories I have read in ages!
You made your characters not only real but I could feel I was in the bedroom with them.
Thank you!
So close to our experience, damn! Please, another chapter? Waiting- K & P, Pa.
go with the flow i say,,,life is too short for monogamy! well written and well paced,, the build up was just right and made the sex so much better. say, you are a professional right?