All Comments on 'Double Shot'

Please say that there will be more to this story, I loved it.

The best romance story I have read on this site. Very nice...

Hope you will post more of this story, would be nice to see that Julia was happy for Erica to have a relationship with Vaughn.

Enjoyed the story. Like the others, I would like to see additional chapters.

A great story please finish it

I HOPE THAT THERE IS MORE OF THESE TWO, OR SOMETHING OF ITS EQUAL IN THE FUTURE

As a single mom of a teenager who lost her husband to cancer, this story hit home on so many levels. It is very realistic in the manner it is told and the emotions that she went through. I hope that the story continues, but if not, your readers will come away with a feeling of love and hope for these two. Thank you for sharing!

I disagree with those who want a sequel. This story is perfect just like it is. You leave us with a satisfying ending, but also a hint of mystery. Do they work things out? Does the daughter approve? How will he friends react? These are questions that the reader should answer with their own imagination. BTW, great first effort. Could use just a little tighter editing to catch some grammatical mistakes and typos, but all in all, a very good story. Earns an easy 5.

lovely, romantic story. i like that that characters are realistic and act like mature adults would. the dialogue had the right amount of sophistication to satisfy my intellect and the sex scenes had the right amount of rauchiness to satisfy the rest of me. i look forward to reading more of your stories.

Only works if you ever deliver, otherwise stories that just dribble off and leave things unresolved are annoying.

Amen to what Thelvyner said. Too many loose ends in this story.

It could have been a great story, but the ending was too weak, vague. I know I say that about a lot of stories here, but I’m pretty insistent that a great story MUST have a great ending. And it seems like a good number of writers get to a certain point in the story and either lose interest or else just don’t know where to go with it. So they slap a paragraph together, and wham bam, that’s all folks. Kinda makes me sad.