All Comments on 'Double Standards'

and tell you to keep writing!!!

love this story and to tell "Dear Annony" the asshole of LIT as she calls him to go fuck it self!!!!!

Hell of a let down at the "end".

1 star due to story incomplete

Good setup though

get rid of the whore wasn't about to let you have other women but she could have other men and women toss her

Only one thing to do. Dump the cheating bitch.

story to disjointed, though interesting. as far as what should he do ? dumb question.

one way relationships with double standards just don't work .dump the unloving bitch

What does he get from this relationship? I don't see anything. How does he find happiness with someone who is searching for joy with everyone else to his exclusion?

is ask someone to proof read your story. E.g. When the husband goes to eat his child in the ball park, he walks round to get in Diana's car. At the end of their conversation she gets out of his truck to go to her car.

It Sucks, The Wimp should put on his Big Boy Pants, and Kick the Bitch to the Curb.

it seems lots of people are fast to make derogatory comments about the writing but don't have the guts to write their own.

Illiteracy is rampant!

My honest, sincere feedback? Learn to write. Learn spelling, grammar, tense, POV and dialogue quotes. Your story is a bit interesting, but the writing destroys it. Asking "What should I do?" in this case is self-trolling.

"Please give me feed back and tell me what you think I should do."

Complaining about comments about the writing after this is delusional.

Does it make you feel better about your writing to, after asking for feedback and getting feedback dismiss the feedback you don't like on the grounds that the comments might come from others who might not write or publish on literotica ? Did you only want positive feedback, maybe ask for that next time. Alternately, embrace the negative though constructive comments and become a better writer.

You had an challenging premise that had potential to go somewhere interesting. It didn't though.

"What should you do"?

Get a lobotomy.

get rid of the slut

Please go and find your balls, you fucking wimp. You give men a bad name. You know the bit about 'once you go black....' the other half of that is 'NOBODY wants you back anyway'.

"What should I do?" Anonymous is right - he should go in search of his balls.

“What should I do?”

Get a fucking editor

crap

Just wasted ten minutes. This one sucks folks.

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