All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

Forgetting the development of she-males, this story just jumped everywhere. No flow and a quick ending. The characters were faceless and despite the non-violent nature of confinement, there was no sex to speak of.

You need to do another chapter. Give details of humiliation of father . Let mother be a femdom and humiliate him daily.

learn to write, spell, Proof Read and Edit!!

You need to learn to write, spell, proofread, edit... and be more than 14 years of age!