All Comments on 'Double Trouble'

Nice, self-delights are always interesting for me!

Not my normal bread and butter but very readable and interesting re twins.

As it didn't give a definitive answer for the twins, I see this as ultimately being lackluster. It read well, enough, but had heavy technical reading instead of erotica. I thought the purpose was to make it so the "audience" chose who was dominant and submissive, but W stole the show and commandeered the show from the get go. Also, the mirror concept doesn't hold up because both would see her own face contorting when it should have been one looking serene while the other's face contorted. Seeing a contorted face, while your face is contorted (you don't have to see your own fave to know it's contorting), whether opposite featured or not should become evidenced a scam or hoax was being played out.

I would have liked more erotica, and less technolica, with a more fitting ending.

I enjoy your stories and writing style