All Comments on 'Doubletree Dilemma'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sorry dude. . .

It was pretty interesting until you had to write in a 14 inch cock for the rapist. Nobody, black or white, has a 14 inch cock. The story would be far more erotic if you focused a bit more on the dialog and made the details more realistic. Yeah, sure it's fantasy, but the fantasy needs to be at least somewhat real to be erotic.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
this is some sort of revenge fantasy if not an outright personal attack

I have a nasty feeling this is someone's attempt ar a sideswiping slander

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