by SophieSimmonds
It was pretty interesting until you had to write in a 14 inch cock for the rapist. Nobody, black or white, has a 14 inch cock. The story would be far more erotic if you focused a bit more on the dialog and made the details more realistic. Yeah, sure it's fantasy, but the fantasy needs to be at least somewhat real to be erotic.
Three stars.
I have a nasty feeling this is someone's attempt ar a sideswiping slander