All Comments on 'Dove's Tale Ch. 02'

but I am glad she didn't give in. I hope she escapes what I assume will be her new captors then goes back and destroys. this guy and his henchman

I was really hoping that the bad guys would see the error of there ways because really there are not to many stories out there that do that.Not that I don't like the slave bdsm just that how can a man think it ok to take someone and them not fight for freedom

She certainly deserves to have a happy ending. But not too soon, since I'd love to read several more chapters... ;o)

Just found this lovely story.

A heroine who s prepared to fight to the end.

Perfect.

Now let's see if she can eventually escape and skewer this mother fucker.

i agree with earlier comments lol especially masterfuljim loving this story and soglad to see someone fight back and absolutely not give in ,, nice to see these arrogant bastards frustrated by someones willpower but not understand how to harness it xx loving it...... more chapters please

You write so well, and this heroine is outstanding - please do not not make her ever give up! Please! Let her escape and get revenge on all these motherfuckers! Please!

You have an awesome heroine. The rest of the story makes me want to give up on humanity. I'm looking forward to Phyllis' eventual escape/rescue.

Make her pregnant!