All Comments on 'Dove's Tale'

she should be a bit smarter about a) when to fight, b) how to fight, and c) when to give in to fight another day. Her actions are guided by anger alone, and that's not going to be enough to survive, which should be her ultimate goal.

That being said, am looking forward to see what happens next.

Please please let Philly keep her spirit and overcome this situation, rather than turn her into a good little slave. Don't let her cave!

Thank you!! I've always wondered in these slave girl tales - what happens when the slave turns - oh, let's say, 40 - no longer in possession of the firm bright flesh of youth in any case. Are they executed? Is there a prison/retirement home for them?

Good job. There are a few typos if you're concerned about such things - didn't detract terribly from the flow of the story.

This is actually the only story Ive read where I want the girl to keep on defying the kidnapper. He's so godamn smug and I just want her to break HIM! That..wont give us a lot of sex..but Im willing to live with that. :D

I also have a love hate relationship with the non category. I love her spirit.

You dont see to many stories where they fight this hard for what they belive I really hope she keeps fighting and shows him he is wrong and it will even be ok as well if happy ever after even with him if he sees the light that cant make women slaves against there will

I like this because dove considers her survival secondary to remaining her and not letting him win.

loving this story hope you update soon i cant wait for the second chapter keep her fiesty and fighting him its a lovely change... hopefully she ll win , love to see how that direction is storylined xxx but dont let her capitulate xx

I love her fighting spirit. I hope she keeps fighting him until she breaks him.

I love her and I love her spirit! Keep her strong, don't let them break her.

Wonderful story thus far. Chapter 2 I hope is imminent, and I would love to find out what happens to the dove caught in the wolfs den. Please keep writing, you have fantastic imagination, and very well thought out and executed paragraphs.

Love it so far!! Crazy but i want to see her broken.

But I want too see HIM broken- not her

Second chapter was submitted, but I guess i went a little 'too' far with it...so had to do a little re-editing and submit again...if/when ch. 2 gets approved, ch. 3 is about 3/4 done and should be ready to follow closely.

Rooting for Philly. She can fight a while longer. And if she can, it's better to do nothing/not react than to beg.

You are right, this girl has real fight in her. Usually the girl yells at her captor in the first chapter and begins to scream his name in passion in the second one!

I hope she gets a chance to break him in the later chapters!

This is the best story I've ever read. Please write more!! This is so freaking good

I really hope I’m not going to be disappointed.

Apparently like many others I too have a love hate relationship with this kind of scenario. Your approach is very refreshing.

Sexual sadism doesn’t do anything for me, erotic pain yes but beyond that no.

An almost-smile appeared on her face as she had an idea. She squeezed a little toothpaste onto her hands, then ran them through her hair again and again, adding some stickiness and stiffness. By the time she finished, she looked like she hadn't showered for weeks.

only broke when he threatened to add wieght to brutal clit clamp - any woman might give up

i adore her bravest non con heroine thanku for giving us a strong female lead

strong dislike for masters who force piercing tattoo and force dry anal on their slaves for punishment

Good story. This is how someone acts when held against their will. Their body doesn't betray them, they don't give in to the pain, they fight to the death. Her battle has made this story so much better.

Now this is a great abduction/slave story, too many times the girl always succumbs to the pain and pleasure almost immediately. I'd give you 10 stars if I could!