All Comments on 'Dowdy Mother in Law Ch. 07'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

They think it shouldn't happen again, but it really should. Cathy is welcome to join in.

smifffy1004smifffy1004about 2 years ago

Loving it. Each chapter gets me harder.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 2 years ago

Downgrade this chapter - I just couldn't give it 5*. The complete and lack of any real loss at the collapse of what was supposed to be a solid marriage by the characters just doesn't work for me. I get it's easier for you as a writer to skip through all of it, but sorry, just laziness from my viewpoint. There were alternate plot lines you could have gone that would have avoided, or at least diminished it. 4*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Think this was all or-sum please carry on with this story. A four-sum would be great also look forward to any new stores that you write

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It was kind of boring to have them ending the relationship =/

MikeOrMikeyMikeOrMikeyabout 2 years ago

To be continued! YES!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Please continue, this story is so hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Another great chapter, except for that bit right at the end of Yvonne never being involved again. Yvonne (and Cathy) need to be in the mix, hopefully as a foursome. Hell, if the protagonist and Viv want kids, they can be the surrogates (with the kids conceived naturally, of course). The Viv/Yvonne stuff was too hot not to go back to.

Scott1946Scott1946about 2 years ago

Loving this so much. So well written got me so hard !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fuck Yvonne, cheated on him the whole relationship. But I guess if this was a realistic scenario, everyone has reasons to be pissed, so whatever lol. Guess it's best not to read into it, and just jack off

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