by Saphhia
Loved this chapter. Now skunk is bare from head to foot great she is ruined now. Well the tat was great the barber greater I'm hoping that she now gets used maybe by the male and female staff at the club she can now be the cum and piss dump slave and since she loves pain whip scars front back and sides maybe a beautiful addition. Please continue.
This is an amazing story. A proud, accomplished woman who surrenders to what she is... What a great story! Thanks for writing it
wow, i loved it, some piercings, more debase, alterations to be uglier, fattened up, sign away her possessions, im waiting for the next chapters, thank u, keep the good work, where else do u write or post ur stories?
Excellent story of downfall. She took possession and established her ownership quickly and certainly. Now I look forward to reading her slow descent professionally.
I hope you will take your time with this portion. Let the THREAT of exposure - rather than actual exposure - be what drives her lust. I'd love to see her be able to remain being a lawyer, but one that has lost her edge. No longer quite the assertive, aggressive litigant. Instead, a slightly less confident one, second guessing herself and deferring to others - especially Vanessa. Make her pay her salary/wages to Vanessa. Eventually even sell her house and move in with Vanessa. I love the idea of the partner-level lawyer (albeit a bit defanged) who goes home and upon stepping into the house, removes her wig, strips off her power suit, drops to her knees, and crawls in to serve her junior employee.
Eventually she'll have to actively help make Vanessa a partner and give up her position. But I hope you make that happen well down the line. She needs to get used to that dichotomous lifestyle a little first. It needs to become tolerable, then acceptable and then routine (and lustful throughout).
Looking forward to reading more.
Thank you to everyone for your kind and constructive comments. I am always happy to take on suggestions pertaining to the direction of the series, although I have to admit to having this one fairly well planned out. Well into the next installment, so look for that to be upcoming within a few days.
S
maybe not related to this particular story, but we really need more like Skinning the Kat, that is the hottest along with Baring it all i have read from you, but this one is going so well and exciting as well, waiting for next chapters coming soon, thanks for the good work
Chapter Three has been submitted and is awaiting approval by the moderators. Barring any hold ups, it should be published in a few days. Thanks for your continued enthusiasm and support!
Saphhia
Great erotic story so far. This is really high level writing and a beautifully told story. I must read all your other contributions. Thanks/
I have enjoyed every single word! I love how you perfectly describe the environment without losing the super exciting plot any paragraph! This is the third of your stories I'm reading and in spite they follow similar course, I'm devouring one after one as a complete hor surprise!