All Comments on 'Down on His Luck'

Loved it! But Keri needs boobs! Will she?

needs a nonconsent/rape warning He abused her and she inflicts this amount of revenge on him? What a cunt. Whats erotic about nonconsensual humiliation and rape? And yes the pegging was rape.

Abusive crap

If you need to explain you stories or why you are doing something... that kills the anticipation and I lose interest in reading the story, Let the stories stand on their own with no explanation.

Actually it is a wonderful story and Keri is adorable. I think that I may have liked it a little better if Keri had implants (but that is just me) but it more than fine the way that it is. Well written with a lovely storyline. 💋

Veronica