by The_Technician
I love this story. This part was a bit short for my tastes, but it's well done and showing Nicole's experiences great. I think I can see what decision will be. :D
You have spoilt your own story about a ponygirl by having the Mistress refer to the ponygirl as "Cowgirl."
It is very jarring to read about a ponygirl and then have a character utter "Cowgirl" randomly. I really cannot understand why you would do this.
Re Anon and Cowgirl/ Ponygirl?
I think the point is that Nicole isn’t going to be just a pony girl, I was under the impression that she would have a wider range of kink available in addition to occasionally being a pony girl.
Loved the chapter, but as someone who loves her quality sleep I’m still not a fan of overnight in a barn upright. I’d have thought it would be too damned cold to try and sleep naked in a bar let alone standing up. I’ve slept standing up and it’s awful. Looking forward to reading more it’s definitely a learning curve.
Tess (uk)
"Re Anon and Cowgirl/ Ponygirl?
I think the point is that Nicole isn’t going to be just a pony girl,..."
I think you put that to words correctly. And if one reads the previous chapters, it's clear why she is called "Cowgirl". This ponygirl part was to teach her a lesson.
Well done story, looking forward to more.
i think this story is great. i binged parts 1-4, so seeing a new part 5 was a delight. i hope Cowgirl can be trained for a long long time. :)