All Comments on 'Downpour'

Pretty hot encounter Kelly !! All heated up and no cock to fill you up... well, we'll see. Haha

Just a failed attempt to write a sex scene.

1 star

Once again, KLovall has crafted a very erotic experience without dragging things out or delving into too much angst.

A perfectly Loving Wife ...... story. Short ... Sweet ... to the Point.

5*

Very well done.

The build up was perfect; the storm both inside and outside of her. This worked very well for me. Thank you!

Great use of similes and metaphors. The approaching squall line and the coming sexual storm complimented each other. Incorrect punctuation was used more than once for dialogue and I wondered if it was done deliberately for effect. I think non-standard usage interrupts the flow. Overall, a well-crafted piece. After the sudden squall, steady rain will fall through a night lit only by candles and fire. I don't think the trio has finished what they started. I'd like to read that next chapter.

I miss you so much

I just learned about Kelly's passing, so sad.....

Way to bring the heat!

I watched her for over a year.

Ideas bubbled up from Dee in her psyche on a regular basis.

She had a habit of not carrying thru. She left us with teasers.

Still, she was brilliant. The world is a dimmer place without her.