by LadyVernier
Intriguing and intensely sensual. The pace of this piece, including dialogue, matches nicely the building erotica. Looking forward to how your surely keep the two lovers together.
Simply WOW! I don't comment often, but had to after reading this. To say I enjoyed it would be an understatement. The Sapphic sex couldn't have been described better. I see it's your first story and hope it isn't the last. A follow-on to the above would be nice, but I have a feeling anything you write will be an enjoyable read. Mark me down as your first fan on Literotica, and welcome.
Quite well-written but it finished rather abruptly and with a number of plot issues unfulfilled. Although there's no indication, I'm assuming that you have further chapters in mind. It would be a pity if you haven't.
WOW so HOT! I think that aptly describes the women, the buildup and the grand finale. Very well done! I think they deserve to get to know each other better. Your fans are hopeful.
A very nice first submission. Very nicely paced. The abrupt ending begs for a follow-up.