All Comments on 'Dr. Mom Pt. 01'

Some big busted mothers have well endowed sons because they are able to attract large cocks.

My mother was a cup bigger and I am an inch longer. Not porn sized but we were noticed.

I'm curious to see how this story continues.

In the beginning, the Dr.'s son was introduced as Lee. It seemed as though after the exam was underway that the name Ben appeared. What's up?

Looking forward to next part!

A bit rushed but good. I was reading it and I kept thinking of how you could have made it even better.

PLEASE !!! KEEP THIS STORY GOING,

IT'S TOO HOT TO STOP NOW.

I THINK IF YOU DON'T GIVE US ANOTHER

CHAPTER, YOU MAY LOSE SOME READERS.

GOOD START, WELL DONE.

..THANKS..

USAF

But the name change from Lee to Ben threw me for a loop. I actually think Ben fits the son character-wise anyway. By all means, though, don't stop now. I'd like to see what kind of obscene we this can go.

Hot story but too short. Watch the name change going forward.

YOU NEED TO FINISH THE FAMILY MANSION STORY!!!

I like the story, but did you need to include that somehow on our overpopulated planet these people are in a town where apparently there’s a ton of women that want to get pregnant from any random sperm donor? Just think you could have left that out unless it’s going to be a lead into another chapter.

Give Lee (or Ben) some chest hair -- he seems a very sexy, muscular, manly young man.

a town full of women that are desperate to get pregnant and a Dr with a stud son is the miracle answer. Did her medical degree come out of a Cracker Jack box. If these desperate women will have sex with Dr’s son then they will go to the high school and seduce all the studs. No Dr needed.

Try again when your not high on drugs and past your eighteenth birthday.

My mom and I did some exploring when I was a teenager. She let me look at and touch her pussy and she watched me jack off.

Stupid

Without any explanation. Great editing!

This had no romance or anything and fuck my shit hole really who wants to hear that?

He can't understand polysyllabic words and the writer can't spell monosyllabic ones, like threw. But the whole story is crap so spelling is the least of the problems.

This whole series not good unfortunately. The writer would have been much better off pulling the different chapters together and trying to form one longer story. The characters are cliched and the 'plot' is non-existent. More work needed.

What a dreamer.......

and BTW, I've never met a Doctor, male or female, who talked like this...........

Immature and stupid....

Good luck

When has ANY well-educated female doctor, blowing her extremely well-hung son EVER say: “Holy fuck, son, you came a fuckton!” Really?

Two fence posts making mad passionate love would be more realistic.

It's not exactly Ibsen, it it?

If i could rate that

Written like a porn script lmao

No doctor talks like a street whore! writing skill needs improvement to be accepted.

what the hell his name is lee then its ben

This is the initial story for the new hero of DC Comic SuperCum, isn't it?

Ridiculous. Starting with "a 39 year old doctor with the body of a porn star" and just got more stupid from there.

the theme was nice to start with,,,,,, a dr mom doin son's physicals narrated in third person.......... but just disappointed due to superfast, express pace and no buildup.....

Well, I'm stunned at this literary tour de force

Like the story. Pretty much what I expected and wanted. In general, I have trouble with you having everyone shout or yell during sex. You could use other, less noisy, verbs from time to time.

***Nasty and funny. Thanks for the read.

Interesting premise, that then ran into a lot of problems. No build up, main character changing names mid story, massive leaps in the development that had zero reason to happen, the mum not acting even slightly like a doctor or a mother.

Not sure how anyone would rate this 4 stars or more, which clearly a lot have...

Thanks for sharing your work!

Who is Ben?

I've read several of your stories. They are very erotic. But your habit of switching the names of your characters now and then is quite irritating.

At the beginning her son's name was Lee then it changed to Ben surely someone could have picked up the mistake

A couple of things, get the names straight. The son started out as Lee, then was Ben. This seems to be a common theme in this author's stories. Second, I find it too cliche that most jocks in these stories are dumber than rocks.

Few things that were weird: 1. why do exactly her son has to get much larger cock and balls in all the tests she performed till him. Why just her own son? 2. Be real with measurements, stay to reality. Most men neer reach even 9 inches when they are hard. And you narrated that he was easily 9 inches even when he was not hard? Thats hard to accept. 3. What came upon a mother to pump and suck her own son while the normal procedure was going on. Either she was really a normal mother and a professional doctor who just cared for her son and also as a patient or else she was already eyeing on her son and she had been very slutty in nature since her younger days, and if thats so, she would become a tramp, how did she ended up being a doctor? 4. In normal scenario, a doctor leaves patient secluded to make himself hard and collect the sample. Its never a doctor's job to make him hard. 5. Even though she decided somehow to make him hard, why would she (out of nowhere) apply her mouth to her own son's penis? Won't she just reluctantly do that job with her hands? To reach this act of swallowing cock, there should have been character building gradually which may reason her to do this act. 6. And then, again out of nowhere, suddenly a mother decides to drink his cum too. Thats again strange. There should be her wild emotions to make her do that with reason. 7. And with that not enough, the author was in such hurry to make mother and son have sex that again, suddenly, a mother and doctor who was few minutes earlier so normal and professional, without any shame or struggle with her own thoughts, shamelessly undressed herself, told her son to lay on back and sat on his cock. You definitely need to reason your story. You can even write a good fast paced story along with character building. Stay factual, stay real, reason at least shortly, explain how the character is feeling whats going on their mind, include more conversation too.

Stupid

Yeah, this is very bad. MomSpoiler pointed out a lot of the illogical decisions without any reasoning to support them, but the biggest problem starts with the beginning.

A testicular exam isn't part of a high school physical.