All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Bk. 01 Pt. 03'

and totally on the edge of my seat! Once again I am floored by this story and you as a writer. Nothing short of incredible. Wow...

Still no complete answers, but they are slowly being revealed. Better writing than the previous two chapters, looks as if you actually let an editor have a crack at it. Good job.

this chapter pulls together the potential shown in the first two chapters. I feed connected to the 'person' that Michael is,not just because of his loss but due to the range of emotions you begin to show. You have a gift in both your stories of creating refreshingly new and interesting settings, from which you gradually pull out characters that we can connect with. I'm willing to wait for you to pace the reveals I'm sure are ahead. One little niggle the mix up in the use of new instead 'knew' as in to know. Having said that the story is strong enough for me to 'read' past this kind of typo. I'm definately recomending that my friends read your work.

I'm hooked