by PassionStJohn
I just read this one. going to look for more. I am a lover of dragons... and now want to find my own Dragon Master. Great JOB
what more could a girl ask for??? This was the first time i have read Your work, will go looking for more!! :)
This story is woven so beautifully, and delicately that by the end of it I have become aroused in intense delight. Your story-telling is very ingeniously devised, and thought out. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. - Jaydia (Why won't it let me log in? Keeps saying Invalid usermane or password, but I know its correct. <sighs>)
That was great now u need one with a night elf ^_^ I would write one my self but im only good with action -_-
-Praz-el
I cant wait to see more of this story, I have also read all of your other stories, you are one of my favorite authors.
NEO
You did a wonderful job on this story. It had all of the erotic elements I was looking for. Your use of description was brilliant! The way the pleasure torture was a great effect. The only thing I can suggest is longer, sex "scenes", but that is a personal preference really. The longer and more detailed the hotter. You truly have a way with words and I hope to see more chapters of this story released.
You wove your tale masterfully and ended it beautifully. What a wonderful statement your story makes on the freedom of submitting! Torturing her with orgasms? Have you perhaps had some experience in that area? I believe so, or you could not have written this story so well. Pray continue!
Very nice dude very detailed, and kept you the storie from begain to end
Absolutely wonderful story that drew me in, and had me begging for more!! Would love to see more chapters of this. Reminds me a bit of the start of Dragonriders of Pern by Anne McCaffrey.
Your story is absolutely fabulous. You are a magical, erotic dreamweaver, and I pray you will weave further tales.... you simply must! And I shamelessly beg for more.
mainstream, this story would do well! this was so well written and well laid that every trait, quality, idea feels natural, as though we all knew about dragons and their customs...
and not to mention how hot their sex was. i am not into bdsm, just slightly, little whispers of no or a slap on the ass during sex, but not whips and the such, wax burning my pussy, but this story was so hot i know i will be reading it again
PLEZ RIGHT MORE. I LOVED THIS STORY IT HAD ME COMING OVER AND OVER AGEN!!! WOW
TAYLOR H
I hope you continue this story. Looking forward to the next installment.
I would see more of this line of story PLEASE I LOVE IT it was truly different and well written Good imagination!
Do you plan on writting more about Bran and Marged? I would love to read any sequals that occur. Great story, well written. I loved it!
This is one of those rare stories that I have to add to my list for masturbation later. It left me soaking wet and I HAD to say something about the magic of the work. A lot of thought and care was put into this story and it's very refreshing. Would LOVE to see more of ... the power in Bran is what every submissive yearns for. Thanks for the aid in orgasm! Please write more along this line.
I just loved this and would to see more stories written