All Comments on 'Dragons of Fraidel Ch. 00-01'

great start ..please keep writing this first chapter was really good..some spelling errors that were just overlooked but great none the less please post more soon..

I like the tale you're spinning. I think you show some real potential. Might I suggest an editor? You're onto something here.

Hey sis... after reading your writing for years you know i adore the stories you spin. Can't wait to see what you do next chapter. *giggles*

Love,

Your big sis.

"The ruler, council, and their families lived on the palace."

Must get cold in the winter time up there.

I'm already drawn in and want to know more!

So what if there are some minor mistakes missed in editing, your story flows well enough to hardly notice them. I had to go back to find them after previous comments.

Look forward to reading more :)

I like the direction you are heading with the story line. I just happened to come across your latest entry and started reading

You should always try to avoid starting a story with an exposition dump. Pretty good otherwise.