All Comments on 'Drawing Lust'

Wow, super hot story. This could do with another chapter, maybe her friend joins in?

5*****

I be lying if I said i didn't want that cock. I wonder how a guy handles it when there's no sluts around to lend a.hand, or mouth, or body.

I think it's time sisters friend comes around for practice

This is a story I read several years ago. Is it a repost or was it borrowed from another author?

this got me all hot and flustered and, goddamn, i can't even write my own comment properly so apologies if it doesn't make sense but fuck. this was so hot and written delectably, i can't wait to see where this forbidden journey goes. much love, ally

Thank you all for the very kind comments so far! I have to admit I'm a bit taken aback by the support. I appreciate you all so much! I read all comments, good or critical, so always feel free to provide your thoughts.

Oh, and @anonymous -- this is an original story that I have been writing the last couple of months. I know you'd just have to take my word for it, but it isn't a repost or borrowed. However, with so many stories posted on here, I wouldn't be surprised if my story (among many others) may have similar traits to others.

What grade did she end up getting on the figure drawing lesson??

Omg what a hot story. Her fixation on his massive cock made for a long slow build up that makes incest stories hotter. And when they finally got to fucking, oh man, it was hot. Well written too. 5 stars +

Outstanding! You have a gift that I am so grateful that you are sharing with us!

Very Hot sister brother story! 5 Stars worth. Hoping the next chapter finishes her art class, and maybe a romp with Sis along with her hot friend.

One of the hottest stories I've read in a long time. Thank you very much.

A lot of seemingly random changes of tense, but an interesting and novel plot to this one.

Your narrative is very good but the dialogue is minimal. Your term "fuck stick" took me out of the story immediately and I almost stopped reading. You handled the plot well but you could have used this as the start to a longer story. 5* - keep writing.

Very wrapped around a tale beginning with disbelief/horror not just in the situation, but the sexual sand paper effect - aww come on, was iterating about shock of seeing b brother as nude model - the size of his cock! Only drawback was the quickness of transition from classroom to bedroom fucking. Still…5*

My guess, though your profile omits your gender, only a lady can so adequately describe the sensation of a large cock n a petite tight pussy. I could actually feel that pulsating sensation. 😁

The dialogue is straight out of a 70's Bee Line novel. Fuckstick? Seriously? Either written by a geriatric exposed to ancient porn, or a 7 year old virgin. Nothing remotely authentic about anything they say. The idea is a good one, but the execution is fundamentally flawed, even allowing for the unbelievably large cock that pollutes all of your stories.

Several of you have called out the term "fuck stick" being a terrible term to use, and I read y'all loud and clear! I clearly missed the mark on that one ^.^" I'll make sure to not use such outlandish phrases in the future!

"with a bellowing roar, I saw his cock explode." 'nuff said 0)

I love the over the top descriptive dialogue hope for a sequel soon

Excellent, simply excellent.

Uhhhh, wasn't this story Supposed to revolve aroubd Drawing her Brother???? for a Grade??? Did we forget that part? i like the action but don't leave us hanging. Would be fun to rxplore the brother with her friend and her jealousy of them.

Would be a lot more compelling if you didn't have to rely on World Class MEGA COCK and a young sister that apparently has an ample supply of dildos on reserve to make it work.

Absolutely amazing and extremely hot, loved it!!!

Would love to see sexy Connor with a splash of sexy chest hair across his upper chest -- a very sexy sight on a young man, and a temptation for his sister to caress and taste maybe? I am also curious if she was able to finish her sketch and maybe get a good grade?

Very very good read. Ever building to the main event. What grade did she receive? hehe

Outstanding story enjoy the setting and you gave both assets worth writing about and not just a hung guy thank you waiting for this to continue

Really well written. Great descriptions of emotion and affection. Thanks! 5/5

Very nice.. 5 stars! Part 2 perhaps?