All Comments on 'Drawn to the Flame Ch. 01'

Love where this is going, can't wait to read more !

So hot! She will be sucking her toes and chucked by his ex in no time, I love this story!

Well written and great plot development. I love how the writer takes the time and words to set this up in a way to make it seem plausible rather than ignoring this important element and plowing right through to the end. The ride getting to the end is the fore play. Well done!

I have only just started reading 'Fetish' stories but, I am hooked on this one. Please write further chapters of ths story so that I might follow.

Regards,

Kris.

Thanks for the feedback! Very excited to share the rest of the story with you. Chapter 2 is coming next month :D

Can't wait to read more.

Thank you for your story so far. I absolutely love this content! My one criticism would be just how quickly Jenna submits to Holly. After such a slow build up, the perfect build up really, its like Jenna sees Holly and just instantly falls to her knees, paying for the shoes. Don’t get me wrong I love this story and it is well written I just thought that maybe that section maybe could have been expanded on a little further. I’m really looking forward to the next chapter dropping hopefully very soon!

Thank you.

A thoroughly enjoyable story, very erotic and a great build.

Lots of potential to go in many possible directions, I look forward to reading the directions you choose soon.

Fabulous writing and story. All 4 parts.